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i'm loving the background you put on the story
the story is even better
keep writtingX_X
read my stories too

yea.. good/sad
and you should check your work
you don't spell things right (coming from me that probably isn't much) and grammar stuff

but still, good story

I really like the idea and all. It is diffrent, really. But, could you double check your spelling/spell check. There are many grammar/spelling things that take away from the story.

Like in one chapter, I noticed you forgot to cap I quite often.

wow that was awsum.....i was almost crying because it seemed real....more wen u can

this is great so far

this is good.
update?

more soon please?