Bittersweet Revenge - Comments

LOL, as I was reading the summary and looking at the hot-pink layout, I was thinking "This is awful lot like Skip Beat!..." And then I realized that it was inspired by it so it made sense. XD Normally I would say the hot pink is distracting in a layout, but this works because of the inspiration. (LOVE ME! =P) The only thing that could make it better is a banner of some sort to fill that empty space.
This story is great, because I am a HUGE fan of Skip Beat! It's funny, cuz my older sister's name is Kyoko too. =P

I also like what you did with the character page. Each description being a quote of the character---haven't seen that before and it's definitely a great idea.

Anyways, back to the story. I definitely like this; it's kind of like the "American translation" version of the Skip Beat! story! I totally love how I see the difference in the original and this. Like how Matt's family owns a hotel, just like how Sho's parents owned the traditional restaurant or something in Kyoto. The connections like that I made in your story only made me enjoy this story more. =D

Just a few minor mistakes; nothing that was disruptive to the story.
Ever since my father died and my mother through me onto the streets. ~it should be 'threw'.

Hmmm, if I were to be more constructive, I would say MORE DETAILS. You have some, but don't just rely on the linked pictures to describe the setting, wardrobe or anything else in the story. A book can't do that, right? But I will say for those links, thanks for not saying it like "And then I pickedthis out and put these on to match." For the most part, you did describe the clothing so I could visualize it without having to stop in the middle of the story to look at that link.

Overall I really enjoyed this story! As a lover of Skip Beat!, how can I not?
Thanks for sharing! Keep it up!!

:)

I like the way it was ended. Nice and sweet with some excitement.

MORE MORE MOREXD

Bwahahahahaha - way to go 'Cali'!!!
Loved it long timeXD
Can't wait for next update!!

I really liked what Cali did with the song and about Matt. That was great

ANOTHER HUNDRED UPDATESXD!!!!<3
loved them. Don't really like the sinful nuns -
kind gross what Chrys did . . . I bet Kyle liked it though, aye?
*waggles eyebrows*
No, Cali needs to get the job.

I just read this whole thing. It's awesome. Getting very interesting. Keep it up!

Ohhh, very interesting!XD
I like it!
Update again soon.

Like, nows goodXD

OmiGOSH!!!!! I love her new look. She's fucking epic!!! And that phone is totally awesome! Can't wait for more - an Summer is, like, KEWL with double awesome! Update soon!

OMG!!! I loved how you finished that chapter! 'Man, was I going to have fun changing the lock tonight!' I f**king LOVE this story!
Update, like, NOW!!!!!

Just stole this stories comment virginity! Yippee!
I LOVE it!
*subscribes*
and just saying, Calligraphy sounds totally effing epic - so does Summer . . .
BuT tHaT mAy ChAnGe!