The Fools That Fall in Love - Comments

Please update! This story is beyond perfect (:

please update!

this is the only fan fic that has ever made me cry. best one i'm reading by far! keep up the good work :)

Yay, I'm so glad you're back! I love this story! :D

I`m very happy you updated. Yes the chapter was short, but I think, in a way, it showed the blooming love between them.

Yayy you updated!!!!
Love this!!
Can't wait for the next update!!!

I really love this story and when I saw this was updated I got really happy! Please update soon :)

please update this is the best fan fic I've ever read!!!!!

update please

i love this plz plz plz update!!!!!!

I don't even know if you still use this or if you will ever write another chapter of this story again but I just want to say this will be my favourite story ever!
I love how the storyline is and how sweet, loving, romantic, well spoken Michael is, and how Lydia is such a strong, loving girl who would do anything for her immortal love.
I have gotten teary a few times because of how romantic this story is, I usually don't like romance like this but this is just like a gift from the heavens.
It's written so well and you can just imagine everything that is happening, which I love in a story.
I hope one day you get to update this and at least complete it, I would love to know what else happens.
There is no story like this and never will be a story like this that had such an affect on me and most likely others who have read this.
I really love this story and this will forever be my favourite.

this story has got to be one of my favorites. It's brilliantly written and the storyline is quite original.
The way you write, it's just.. great.
I'm looking forward to the next update.

Oh my goodness!This story is amazing!It just is!!!!I really like Lydia,she's pretty cool.And I really love Michael.I had only heard a couple songs by Vampires Everywhere,before reading this.They're pretty good.And of course,Michael is gorgeous!I love how his character IS so sweet and romantic.Not many men are these days.It's refreshing that, human or not,Michael is a generally nice guy.Somehow I knew Jason was bad news.But I didn't think he was a demon,I just thought he was a rival vampire.This story is so freaking fantastic and amazing! You truly are a gifted writer! Only thing negative I have to say,and it's not really negative, Is that I think things moved just a tinsy bit too fast BUT you did it in a non cheesy way so I think that made everything flow beautifuly together.Really glad I stumbled upon this story.I'm addicted to it now!It is nothing like Twilight,so you have nothing to worry about.And I would know because I'm an enormous Twilight fan.But I agree,vampires shouldn't sparkle and they should have fangs.Anywho,I really hope you update soon...Like freakishly soon because I am dying to find out what happens next!So excited for the next update!!I'll be waiting....but not in a creepy way lol

Love this! Hope you update!

PLEASE PLEASE Update soon! this story put me through more emotions than ever. I am completely in love!

Great story! even though I'm only on chapter 5 haha. I noticed that a abusive boyfriend's name changed from Jason to James xD

omg this story is amazing!!!!!!

I love thiss...update please? :3

Well I'm glad Michael is still alive..ish.. I hope he heals soon though :(

I`m so happy you updated, even if this chapter was sad. I was actually almost in tears as i read it. Iv`e been craving Vampires and Michael Vampire all day, which just makes me more happy for this update.