I think this describes nature and the way humans wrecked human nature beautifully. You have great grammar and I couldnt find any mistakes. You discribed everything so perfectly I could image pictures in my mind. I also liked the layout. It went well with the story. And I could see how you got your inspiration from the Cold Play song. Last I could say is keep writing and never let anybody ever tell you different.
Last I could say is keep writing and never let anybody ever tell you different.