Beautiful... simply beautiful... Poor girl... all in all going on in my head are.....: 1) The mother! Does the mother know or somehow pretended she didn't know! A mother should feel what her daughter is going through! (.. watching too much movies lol) 2) I wonder if Lilium is going back to her house... O.o 3) I hope that that bast**d will get what he deserved.... DEATH! MUAHAHAH
All in all.. its not the best.. but its a great story.... <3
Just finished chapter 1.... I couldn't focus on the grammar nor the writing because the storyline went through me.. You already caught me by the name "Lilium".. and I must tell you I LOVE the anime... so... As I read your story, the anime flashed through my mind and I can imagine the pain Lilium was going through perfectly.. Bravo! I'll comment again after I finished reading chapter 2 & 3...
Thank you!