Nightmare - Comments

Too freaking cute Nathan is! I have a feeling that kid is gonna crack me up most of this story, I hope Shadows doesnt hurt him though...

Brian is a damn good daddy! and still sexy as hell im deeming him a D.I.L.F. =)

I just love Jess lol she is awesome! =)

and little Johnny =( I swear that man cant catch a break when it comes to relationships! HOpefully he gets his revenge =)

Gawhhh Nathan is soooooo cute!!! Omg if I had a chance to babysit him I'd totally say yes to everything. And goodness.. Can't go a minute without Jess and Brian jumping each other lol
Definitely really excited for this to get rolling, and I love how it started ^^

I absolutely adore Nathan already ^.^ Hope Shadows isn't gonna end up kidnapping him to blackmail Jess........ >.<

Wonderful first chapter and the perfect way to set things rolling. I was just thinking about this story and hoping it would be updated when Tada!

I've said it before but it needs to be said again; you're an amazing writer and I look forward to the next chapter.

Love it! So, Jess is back to her job as a lawyer? I'm anxious to hear how her family is doing... :] Smart Nate to swindle Johnny like that! My kids try to do the same thing! (Too bad I know their tricks...) Can't wait for the next chapter!!!

I can't wait....super excited to read this sequal =)

How can you deny such a cute kid a trip to the zoo? And I can totally see Brians kid slipping away from Reaper. Love love love it!!!! Smply amazing!!

Ooh yea shes back boo yah lol n i love nate hes so cute n quickly make ppl do things for him

That little boy is so fucking awesome. Where is that whore so I can choke her!! Nobody hurts my munchkin!! Anyways Jess seems like a headless chicken in the morning.

First off; I love how this has started off.
Second; I legit fucking LOVE Ben 10, I have pyjamas, t-shirts, socks, toys, hats, DVDs, blankets and tons of stuff. :3

Can't wait to read more :3 <3

First off; I love how this has started off.
Second; I legit fucking LOVE Ben 10, I have pyjamas, t-shirts, socks, toys, hats, DVDs, blankets and tons of stuff. :3

Can't wait to read more :3 <3

iawehy8otfh8oe oh god. :3 I love you

Oh My Fucking Lamb! I can not wait for this one! I loved Scream! I hope Its just as long if not longer then Scream and even juicier then Scream! :) Keep' em coming Kid Your doing awesome!

I'm so excited for this.

Ok time to post the first chapter!!!!!! Cant wait to see what happens and two the family is and their little son and everything is going. Also cant wait to see whats at the end of the chapter, hopefully a pretty pretty kitty!!!!!!!

I can't wait for this to start. :>
I can not tell you how happy it made me finding out the baby is Brians.
I ugh, I can't wait. So since Rev never finished his deed, does this one include more Rev? I want to know if Matt ended up surviving. Hoo sdkfnhgklj

Hun you most definitely do NOT suck at summaries!
I am really excited for this!
I am really happy that the baby turned out to be Brian's.
All the sexy time paid off (;
But when I read that she should have expected something one thing ran though my mind...
The Rev.

Upate soon please

can't wait for this one

I don't care what anyone says.
Scream was one of the best damn written Avenged stories in the history of mibba.
Every little detail helped it to be an amazing piece of work.
And I am in anticipation for this sequel.
I don't think I've ever been more excited for a story.
You ma'am, are a damn good author.
NEVER give up on writing.
Because your work deserves to be read by all.
And forever adored.
:)

Oh my God. I can't wait until this starts! (: