Malicious Intent - Comments

  • BUSTANUT

    BUSTANUT (100)

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    Wow, is all i have to say.

    When I finished it, I felt this weird feeling take over me. It was so depressing and I read the whole thing while listening to the song. It fit it perfectly. You almost gave the song two different stories behind it.

    First the part where he's at the club and takes the girl home. "Get you out of the cold. A sober, straight face gets you out of your clothes" when he was with the random girl. And then he goes home to his girlfriend and tries to have sex with her too. Such a dick move and it's so fitting with the song. 'I will lie awake. And lie for fun and fake the way I hold you. Let you fall for every empty word I say" I so perfect for John's relationship with Olivia. She is so in love with him and doesn't see the gay he's playing and that fits perfectly with the song.

    And the last sentence, WOW! Fucking perfect way to end it. I loved how dark it was.
    "It worked every time."

    Perfect girl! Thank you so much for writing this (:
    November 15th, 2011 at 02:59am
  • spidey babe parker

    spidey babe parker (100)

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    This was so good. I love that you got to see the darker side of John. (:
    November 15th, 2011 at 02:22am