Band on the Run. - Comments

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Layout
Easy to read, dark which I like. I'm not really a fan of the banner you used. I think that it's very nice to look at, and obviously was difficult for whoever made it, and I get that it fits in with Pink Floyd and all but that's just not my thing. I also don't really like the title, you don't need a full stop in it.

Content
As far as content goes you need more detail. This is a long story so it's needed. If you were writing a drabble or a short story then obvious there's no need for it, but in this story I found myself wanting more! Although the descriptions you do give are top class. I like the plot and no one really writes about Pink Floyd, so extra marks for creativity!

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Okay so I was surprised to see a Pink Floyd story, I've never come across one before. Anyway, I read the first couple chapters because I'm way to lazy to read up to 60 something. But from what I read I found it pretty interesting. Oh, before I forget I love your banner, very creative. Also, I didn't see any spelling or grammar issues so kudos to you.

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I read the first three chapters, they were really REALLY short which uoset me a bit. You have an interesting idea going on and I really like it. Including the banner looks amazing!

Keep writing and good luck

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First of all, can I just say your banner is awesome! Did you draw it? In relation to your writing, I can't really fault it. I read the first five chapters and they were pretty flawless. Your spelling was great and your grammar was okay but definitely not the worst I've seen. Your plot is flowing really nicely and I like the characters that you've made. I thought this would be a Beatles fanfic, so that was a little disappointing but it was still a great story.

Keep up the good work :)

i dont think i mentioned that the banner is awesome

i dont think i mentioned that the banner is awesome

Pink Floyd, so not what i expected to find on here, a pleasant surprise though :)
I love your writing and your relatively short chapters. I havent finished reading yet because i dont have time to sit through 60-something chapters at the moment but i am going to finish this eventually.
Thanks for being guttsy enough to put a pink floyd story up

Wow, I LOVE the picture, it's amazing! Where'd you find it? And this is a completely amazing story. Its the best, and I agree with Taion. How do you not have more comments?! There's no grammar or spelling errors. The characters are extremely amazingly done. I love the story overall, the picture, the layout, and the actual story!

Love it!

Thanks to all the people who have commented. It means a lot to my co-author, LoVe Is ReAl, and I. We worked really hard to make this story keep going.

Anyways, if there is any suggestions, don't hesitate to message either of us. :)

Pink Floyd among all of the Andy Six /Whomever is popular at the moment... this is amazing.

This. Might. Be. The. Best. Story. Ever.

So many chapters and no comments?! HOW IS THIS POSSIBLE. This is really cool. Not many people would write something with Pink Floyd. Very awesome.