maybe you can also go more in depth with james' past or what he does most of the time "working"? i'm still kind of confused on what it is he actually does...but i loved it!! Please update again soon!!
I'm so glad your updating again! I absoloutley love it! I feel like you should update often though in order to keep the story rolling. Just a suggestion. I can't wait until the next chapter! I'll be waiting!
i love it, i wonder about margerite too! I think she's going to cause trouble! please update again soon, and maybe have some more funny or special moments between the two main characters would be cool! and maybe a little longer?