Long Way - Comments

:( i dont like that she took him back. Once she slept with him i wasnt happy. I think he fucked up too much for her to just run away with him second time she sees him in four years. All in all, it was a very good story and i loved the romance in it. It was very emotional and it had a lot of turns and stuff. But i feel like she could have done fine without him coming to complicate her life again. Maybe thats just me tho. Anyways, i loved it! Im a little sad its over. But glad u are feeling good about it. :)

i have to give u a little bit of shit. If she was having progressive contractions and her water had broken she was already in labor. They only give the drugs when the woman does not naturally labor and its getting dangerous for the baby. And when they induce it takes like hours and stuff of labor. Ok....shit giving over. Oh...and the name is interesting haha. But all in all it was a good chapter. Very emotional and beautiful. I very much enjoyed this one :)

i really liked this one. The ending was powerful. I feel bad for him. But i still dont understand how he thought her boss was gonna raise the baby? Thats stupid. But it was a very good chapter. This is such a good story. Very emotional. Cant wait for more!

it was a good chapter. it was emotional, and sad in its way. I could feel her confusion. i could feel how upset she was, and how much she wanted him to love her and want her and their baby. it was good. i loved it.

i knew she was pregnant!! The first time she puked i knew she was pregnant with Declans baby! Oh my god a baby is soooo bad at this time in her life! And that douche left her! Wtf! Oh my god he so better come back and take care of his baby! Oh my god!! More soon?

...hey i can comment direct from the story page....weird. Anyways, this was another really good one. Really powerful in its way. Like u can tell how much she wants to let him go because she knows its right, but how much she cant because no matter how right it is it hurts too much. I really love it. More soon??

i loved this chapter. It was dramatic and sympathetic and it just made me feel so bad for her. So many people lied to her when they had to kno she would find out eventually. It was amazing. More soon??

Oh fuck man! why didnt he just tell her! omg i was so pissed off!!! I wanted to punch that fucker in the face! omg. and haha i was laughing when she told off the guy at the door. I laughed. It was a good chapter. a fun little filler kind of chapter. can't wait for more. :)

it was a beautiful chapter. She made a revelation, she and Declan reminised. it was lovely. i really liked it. :) more soon?

I'm glad u put a little apology in there, because i was about to come and let you know that i was annoyed :P lol. And! U used my comment about him being a tornado :P wOO! lol. well...the sex was at least nice and erotic. haha! I have to throw this out there, the gay friend, that's awesome. :P haha. it was a fun little chapter. :) more soon?

This one was good. it had some sexual tension and stuff. It was a little short. But it was a good chapter, and i enjoyed it. I'm glad she didn't sleep with him, because when they were starting to get heated up i was like, no...she can't do that. He's like a tornado rolling in and out all the time, and she can't get with that right now. Like she needs to focus on whats important or whatever. does that make sense? More soon?! :)

this one was good. This one was excellent. if i didn't already "know" what was up, this one would have me thinking so hard. trying to figure it out. trying to see what she can't see. and the fight was just perfect too, haha. I loved this one. it was a great chapter babe. good job!

Hey! What's with the little dig at me in the Authors note?! jesus!!!! Okay, completely honest opinions. Let's see. I'm really confused. This story...it goes in too many directions all at once. I'm not really sure what exactly its about. I mean. I know its about Diana. so far that's all i've really really grasped. and I know the basic point is going to be the break ins and stuff. But i dont understand. This chapter was a little bit of a filler i felt. It was good, but it still didn't really tell me what's going on. I'm not trying to be hurtful or anything, i promise. I feel bad now :( I just feel like...there is too many directions all at once. Like, there is her boss, and then there is Declan, and then the break ins have become kind of a back burner thing. Isn't that supposed to be the main point? or is the relationship the main point? idk. I'm just confused. This story has so much potential, i really think i could enjoy it, it just needs to get going a little bit. :)

What did he do? jeez. and what did her nephew do? I dont like guys that act like douches and run that whole "its none of your business" crap. i mean really, just fucking tell the girl that is letting u live in her house what he needs to freaking know! ugh!!! okay, mini rant over. sorry about that. it was a good chapter i loved it. more soon?

It was a good chapter. good to get some of the insight in there, and to see her relationship with the guy kind of come up a little. it was a good one. i liked it.

Okay, take two. This chapter is really good for getting to know the girl and how she lives. I'm excited to see how the plot unfolds and develops. :) and an original fiction, yay! :)

Can't wait for more. :) i love it. :)