The story is very good. You may have taken the main idea, but I can see the difference and that this is yours. You should write more soon and don't worry about your insperation. That'll be our little secret.
Hey ya I'm getting my insperation from the Twilight series. I loved it soo much!!! But I am trying to tie myself into it.... Not working so well, but thanks for the comments!
hey its cool in all but are you getting your inspiration from twilight maybe?? cause its kind of like twilight in the sense of his hand balling in a fist and the fact that they have science together and he needs to get out and he'll "do anything" ...but im not being mean cause i do like it and its a different twist just mainly wondering if its where you got ur inspiration?? keep writing its great....