This was amazing. And too short yet the perfect length and the whole thing was just perfect, and you should write forever because you are good at it. I'm not sure I have the words to say any more on that.
this story is NOT weird. seriously, it's freaking awesome. i loved it. i was hooked on it. i really loved your writing style you got there. i have been trying for years to write like that :p i wish you all the luck to writing more stories! :)