Almost Lover - Comments

Because I couldn't decide between you and another user for 2nd place, you both get it. I loved everything about this because it was so raw and I didn't even mind reading the length of it. It came from your heart and it deserves a prize as well. <3

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2nd: 2 stories/poems/whatever of yours on my profile for 2 weeks. I will also make you two icons. You may request a certain person/thing for any of them, or give me a picture(s) to make into two different icons.

Good lord, Summer. I knew what this was to be about the moment I laid eyes on it, but it seriously broke my heart and nearly made me cry. Your use of metaphors within this is simply beautiful and precious. I feel as if I can't give you this long, lengthy comment over something so heart shatteringly personal. I'm always at a loss of words when it comes to personal things because I can't critique it; all personal pieces are perfect in every way to me because the author is being brave enough to bare their soul for anyone to look at. This truly is one of the most extraordinary pieces I've read, though. Mainly because I know, you know? I know how you felt; I was the same way when I was a freshman. Only I was hurt far worse; but I don't regret it. Each heartbreak is a learning experience and will get you one step closer to the right person. You've got to keep that in mind, darling. Never regret anything in life; it happened for a reason. <3

I have no words for this. None. Therefor, I can't give you a long comment, because there is nothing I can say to cover this. At all. I don't even...

Wow.