Up All Night - Comments

you can't just end it! i'm waiting for the ending. 'm rooting for louis but poor niall :( and your writing is most def. not bad. i mean i troll the site just to look for a great story that makes sense and is not badly written and yours is one of them! Keep it up! :)

I love this. I really hope everything works out with her and Louis. cause I just spent like two hours bawling over another story where the main character DIDNT end up with Liam. And if that happens with this story, I don't think my emotions will be able to take it haha

Your description is daunting. I'm afraid to even finish the first chapter. But I can do this. I will do this!

(war cry) FOR NIALLLLLLLLLL!

Hey! I just read the whole story:) I really liked it!! You're a great writer:) Btw I found some things that Mars & I have in common! I have hazel/green eyes, curly reddish hair & well my two favourite lads are Niall & Louis! xx keep writing it!

Come backkkkk. Update again please? (: I can't take the suspense! It's so good and adorable. (:

Ah! An update! <3
I love Louis so much, but ARGH. D:<

YESSSSSSSSSSSSSS so happy you updated.
I was on pins and needles waiting XD
I feel so bad for Niall :( but it's not like she planned for it to happen but gkldkgdflg
& Aw Harry! So sweet! Even though they are both some of his best friends he still helps Marlene :)
Can't wait for the next update love!

Yay and update!!
I laughed more than I probably should have at the 'Harry Stylish Pants'.
But omg he's such a good cousin! I do hope everything gets sorted out with the whole Marlene, Louis, Niall love triangle. And while I will always love that little Irish lad, I can't help but root for Louis, I mean they are perfect together! It was fate!

HARRY STYLISH PANTS.
WUT WUT.
SEXY BEAST.

On the other hand,
GO LOUIS! GO LOUIS! GO LOUIS!
GET IT IN BROTHER.
Even though Marlene is dating Niall and my love for Niall is everlasting.
But Louis, seriously. Geddinthere.

This chapter was awesome. I loved that Marlene enjoyed the kiss because if she didn't I'd be slapping that chick across the face a thousand times over. As if you wouldn't enjoy Louis' kisses. Honestly.

And Harry is so sweet. <3

This is perfect omg
I love this and I've already subscribed!
I can't wait for the next chapter because I know some juicy things are about to happen!
:D<3

This is story is amazing! The way you write and all your descriptions of what is going on, what happened (when you do the flashbacks), or your depictions of a characters feelings are so well written and it really makes you feel and understand the character and what they're thinking and why they're thinking that.

At this point I do feel bad for Niall because, well they are official now, but Louis plucking up the courage and kissing her was just fantastic and oh-so adorable.

Keep up the fantastic work(:

As happy as I am that Marlene finally finding out that it was Louis she met all of those years ago I can't help but feel so bad for Niall. I mean come on they just became official D: ah I know Louis liked her but klsdgkdhg GAH!

Yay they kissed! I feel bad for Niall but I want her to end up with Louis. :D

Ah! i was soooo happy when i got the email about the update! poor louis though aww. his heartache saddens me! while i am happy that niall is happy, there's still poor lou. the kiss was a very nice surprise though! i can't wait to see what happens next :)

_{Poor Lou. I mean, awww. They're together.
TOGETHER.
Oh well. I still love how they said it though.
It was like they were getting married. It was so cute!}

I didn't know you updated!! Oh nuuuu, as much as I love my wee Niall, they just shouldn't be together arghhhhh!!! But superb piece of writing, I love this story so much, it's my favourite :) <3

Ah as much as I love Niall I just can't love him and Marlene together. I just feel so bad for Louis having to watch it all go down.
I can't wait to see what happens next :)

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

Oh no poor Louis! I feel so bad for him right now. He's probably going to be even more upset than what he was before!

I feel really sorry for Lou right now Ink. Why do you have to take him away from Mars? T^T