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  • jaiz3l

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    Sorry to hear about you're breakup =( but thanks for the update! I love this story!
    March 21st, 2012 at 05:06pm
  • ReadyToFall22

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    I'm sorry bout your boyfriend :( but thank you for the update
    March 19th, 2012 at 02:30pm
  • celestial_royalty

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    Hm...it seems like there was a lot of nothing happened in this chapter- not that it was bad, but that nothing...happened. so yeah- sorry to hear about the break up. Maybe writing will help you get it out of your system
    March 19th, 2012 at 06:28am
  • FuckNo

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    Don't push yourself too hard. If you're going through some issues then you're going through some issues. Writing your story shouldn't be painful or a huge trouble for you. If you need time, then take it. Just make sure when you are able to come back to write us an epic chapter. ;)

    Seriously though, it's cool. I get it. Life does what it wants to and that sometimes means fucking with your relationships. You'll be okay though and you may even have moments where you feel more comfortable writing anything. Take those moments. Otherwise, I'd rather you wait until you're ready and can put out the work you're proud of then to force yourself to write something you're not because you're afraid of letting people down.
    March 19th, 2012 at 06:23am
  • just.breathe.

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    I can't wait for more!!!!!
    March 19th, 2012 at 06:06am
  • Bamboo33010

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    Aw snap. Jacob how could yoooou? Lol great update. Btw, sorry about the break up <3
    March 19th, 2012 at 06:05am
  • celestial_royalty

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    Ehh its alright I suppose. I'd like more Paul-Alyssa time, if possible. Those two Exchange such snappy comments! So much fun. A picture of Sita would be nice. I don't like Alyssa because her fear of wolves makes her seem weak, but at least she's overcoming it- and I hope to see her strengthen and grow in different ways. I shall remain subscribed until further notice!
    March 15th, 2012 at 08:55am
  • Bamboo33010

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    Love love love!
    March 1st, 2012 at 05:17am
  • sporteegurl

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    yeah. glad for the update! can't wait to read more
    February 27th, 2012 at 12:45am
  • FuckNo

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    Subscribed! I like this story a lot.

    However, I noticed one small error at the beginning of the latest chapter. You put 'He tried to ask gently but you could feel anger coming from him.' That's second person so just change the 'you' to 'I'.
    February 26th, 2012 at 07:07am
  • ReadyToFall22

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    I really love this story! Please update soon!
    February 23rd, 2012 at 05:32pm
  • paramore4

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    Best fanfic story I've ever read can't wait for more :D
    February 22nd, 2012 at 12:25pm
  • skinny love.

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    Pardon my French when I say...
    HOLY FUCKING HOLY SHIT MOTHER FACKING BALLS.
    I LOVE THIS, this truly is something that is turning out GREAT.

    Please continue.
    February 19th, 2012 at 04:44am
  • skinny love.

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    Just some advice; maybe spread out the chapters more, giving them
    more length and detail.

    Other than that, I'm already addicted to this story, it's fantastic!
    :D
    February 19th, 2012 at 02:01am
  • cocopuffs

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    She finally gets to know the whole truth, and she gets to reunite with Jacob :)
    February 11th, 2012 at 03:02am
  • cocopuffs

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    Wow I love this chapter. The imprinting is really starting to show and I know she can't wait any longer after the last dream. Please update soon!
    January 12th, 2012 at 01:01am
  • SimplyFaith

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    Loving it ! Update soon !
    January 11th, 2012 at 11:38pm
  • SimplyFaith

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    Loving it ! Update soon !
    January 11th, 2012 at 11:37pm
  • Canadiangirl

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    ommmg she has to go back already, it's killing me.
    January 11th, 2012 at 09:46pm
  • PhoebenPaige

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    Pretty fuckin good so far :D
    January 11th, 2012 at 07:05pm
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