Under a Paper Moon - Comments

  • Nanook

    Nanook (125)

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    So I just read this story and its prequel, and I absolutely adored both. I was looking for something to read and the first story was just kind of a short one so I decided to give it a shot. And I'm glad I did. :D
    It then brought me here because I was curious to see what would happen next and I'm so happy that Alex and Kaya got together! :D
    I'm sad that this was never completed though. :( It's a really good story and I think it deserves an ending. To be quite honest, where you left off doesn't really leave too many questions. I think you could honestly just have an epilogue to this, looking at Alex and Kaya a few years down the line, saying whether they stayed together or not, what exactly happened with the relationship... just to give this story more of a conclusion. And seeing as the prequel was pretty short, it would make sense for this one as well. :)
    But that's totally your choice. I just wanted to leave a comment letting you know I enjoyed both stories and perhaps motivate you to continue...? :) Even though it's been a while, again, I feel like this could be wrapped up with a simple conclusion.
    You're a really great writer and I will probably be checking out some of your other stuff as well. :)
    And to leave off on a random note: I found it kind of hilarious/ironic how you used some Taylor Swift songs as inspiration in the prequel, but used her as inspiration for what Grace looked like on the characters' page. Haha.
    January 14th, 2016 at 09:46pm
  • Felicia_Selina

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    Love it <3
    March 5th, 2012 at 06:26pm
  • Felicia_Selina

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    Love it. The prequel was awesome. Can't wait to find out what you got planned for this one <3
    November 19th, 2011 at 09:44pm