Nice. I like that your character isn't Goth or Emo or one of those stereotypes. There aren't many characters here on Mibba that wear anything but band tees and black jeans/ skinny jeans/ baggy black pants. :oops: I'm kind of guilty of that myself...unfortunately. Well, occassionally I make my characters individuals...oh, I'm rambling. Back to your story.
I think this story will do well. It's nicely written, and that's something I look for here on Mibba.