I liked this! It was really interesting the way you set up everything. The first part was very very good, I loved the way you described how she felt and how it's like to try to hold on to the memories of someone you loved, I thought you did a wonderful job at making the reader understand the situation of your character. I liked the fact that you gave us sufficient information about what had happened between the characters, that made the ending a lot more realistic in a way. I also liked the way you used the promt, i wasn't expecting that and I worked well. Thanks for the great entry ;)
November 22nd, 2011 at 12:16am