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  • bashful

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    Another fantastic chapter. The way it switches from one person's view of the night to another persons is really good, I think :)
    November 24th, 2011 at 09:17am
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    Awesome first chapter. Your writing style is fantastic and I like how the story wasn't over explained too much too early, giving it that mysterious edge.
    November 21st, 2011 at 05:26pm
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