Lips Of Deceit - Comments

please make a sequel???? oh my god the ending was crazy i would totally love a sequel!!!

Pleasssse make a sequel. I know it's been like a year, but this was awesome.

This was so fucking incredible, I loved it! You have to make a sequel!

holy hell!
this soooo needs a sequel!!!

Bloody hell! I would never have expected that!
Wow.
Is it weird that I find psycho Brian hot and sexy?:')
But I freaking love this! I'll be judging the entries on the 8th December x

Wow this is amazing! definetly wasnt expecting Brian to be a serial killer!
Please do the sequel [:

Definitely wasn't expecting all that, but I loved it! And poor Arianna and Brian. I was crying for both of them. Please do the sequel. Pretty please? I'd love to read it. This whole thing was awesome.

BRIAN ELWIN HANER JR. or should I say Brandon Shaffer? Anyways. BRIAN ELWIN HANER JR. LISTEN TO ARIANNA AND GO GET HELP. Shame, shame, Brian. *shakes head*

I loved it! I still feel sorry for Brian (Brandon?) because the only woman he loved walked away :(

AMAZING! That was such wonderful work! I was truly capitvated. I read all of it at once, and I'm so stoked about stumbling across this. Totally made my night :D

No, dammit! Do you know how much cliffhangers suck?! And what the hell did Brian do? And what's going to happen now? So many questions! Update soon please! I must know what's next!

What. Did. Brian. Do???

Fucking love the layout! And I can't wait to see where this story goes.
Loved the first chapter <3

I like this, fluff or not. Brian's cute trying to surprise her. ^.^ But I want to see what's going to happen next. But it's awesome. :)