Stolen Away - Comments

Durch-Den-Monsun-87 (100)

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really loving this story so far! i was a bit confused at first but i'm better now. do you need anymore characters? b/c i'd be happy to be one!!!
update sooon!

January 30th, 2012 at 05:31pm

Marissa.Motionless (100)

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You still need characters?

December 30th, 2011 at 06:32am

Neon_Skies_Killjoy (100)

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*is confused*

December 4th, 2011 at 06:50pm

Marissa.Motionless (100)

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Some spelling problems for example " Fertile not fertilie. But I like it. Good job!

November 21st, 2011 at 07:13pm

Neon_Skies_Killjoy (100)

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Some spelling issues. Punctuation.
Other than that it was good.

November 21st, 2011 at 02:55pm

Neon_Skies_Killjoy (100)

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Ps if you need any help.
Editing spelling <-that jizz
I'll help just send it to me and i'll work on it when I can!

November 21st, 2011 at 03:02am

Neon_Skies_Killjoy (100)

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Comment virginIty is mine!
I love this!
<3

November 21st, 2011 at 03:01am