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  • fazedmemories

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    UPDATEEEEEE
    June 4th, 2012 at 06:33am
  • hachie

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    I think Mr. Saintclair is a douche because he has been putting off to spend time with his daughter now that he hears that the work has been hanging around her, that catches his attention.
    I just hope that she finally stands up to her father opens his eyes and see that he isn't there all the time and he is making her miserable!
    I can't wait for the next update!
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    April 3rd, 2012 at 06:02am
  • alyv08

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    Started reading this today and I love it. Can't wait to see what happens next :)
    April 2nd, 2012 at 06:09pm
  • unmade beds

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    i love this story i constantly want to know more so please update again real soon :)
    April 2nd, 2012 at 03:53pm
  • hachie

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    I bet Josh was looking forward to spending alone time with Amelia but his friends interrupted when they came barreling in the place!
    And they seem to like her and realize that she is a lot cooler of you get to know her since they first thought that she was a stuck up rick bitch! lol
    So her father still hasn't apologized for standing her up on her birthday?????
    And none of her friends that she left behind have contacted her since she left?????
    Talk about heartless people but at least she has gained new friends!
    I can't wait for the next update!
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    March 3rd, 2012 at 03:37pm
  • Snapback-Princess

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    Loved that update! Amelia has such a hold over Josh! Xx
    March 3rd, 2012 at 12:13am
  • LookingUp93

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    I love it, update again soon. can't wait to see what happened with Josh :D
    March 2nd, 2012 at 11:52am
  • BUSTANUT

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    Update!! I really want to know what's up with Josh.
    February 29th, 2012 at 09:42am
  • Underdog425

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    LOVE IT!!! Post again soon :)
    February 15th, 2012 at 06:53pm
  • hachie

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    Now that I read this chapter, I am freaking dying to find out what happened that caused Josh to end up in a court and just feel so numb.
    It seems to me that something happen to Amelia that ripped her away from him.
    Since he has nightmares of her, memories of times they spend together.
    Maybe they got into an accident or something but I am dying to find out what happened!
    I can't wait for the next update!
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    February 15th, 2012 at 03:44am
  • Snapback-Princess

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    This was fab! You write Josh's character really well :) xx
    February 14th, 2012 at 09:26pm
  • unmade beds

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    i just found this story, and love it so far can't wait to see where you take it
    February 14th, 2012 at 02:12pm
  • Snapback-Princess

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    Can't wait to see what happens between Josh and Amelia! Update soon?! <3
    February 13th, 2012 at 09:39pm
  • saveredheads

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    This is amazing! You should update soon, please?
    February 11th, 2012 at 08:54pm
  • Camcas555

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    This is so good! Can't wait for the next chapter :)
    February 11th, 2012 at 10:05am
  • hachie

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    I love your Josh Franceschi story!
    You should be getting more comments for this amazing story!
    So Amelia's parents are the type that are rich and can give anything to Amelia except love and attention.
    Like how Amelia wanted to talk to her father but the he blew her off for meeting and when it came to have dinner, he got too into his work that he forgot about his plans with Amelia.
    And her so friends are backstabbing bastards!!!!!!
    Her ex best friend is dating Amelia's ex and somehow turned the rest of Amelia's friends against her.
    What the hell?????!!!!!
    But I am glad that she is warming up to Josh! X3
    I can't wait for the next update!
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    January 30th, 2012 at 07:51pm
  • frankschick1

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    I really like this story! Keep up the good work
    January 25th, 2012 at 12:54pm
  • BUSTANUT

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    Awwwh, I'm glad your back. I was worried that this wasn't going to get updated! I really like this and I thought the last part was cute. Amelia finally being nice hahaha. Her and Josh are kind of cute, I really can't wait to see what happens!
    January 24th, 2012 at 05:54am
  • SamanthaKaylynn

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    shifbjfibkdiiej I'm kinda in love with this story. the way they both have a mysterious past and issues to try and get over. I love it. I'm really excited to see them get to know each other as time goes on and start to hear about what happened to Josh. keep up the good work! :)
    January 17th, 2012 at 07:00am
  • BUSTANUT

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    I really enjoyed this. I'm shocked that you don't have any comments. I think Amelia's a bitch but a bit missunderstood and Josh, well he seems a bit off. I wonder what happened 12 months ago.
    I can't wait to see this story develop as well as the characters. You're doing a great job can't wait to read more! (:
    January 7th, 2012 at 07:37pm