With Eyes Wide Shut - Comments

ASDFGHJKL, holy crap, the feels.

The feels. They're too intense. Oh Jesus, this is so good and heartbreaking and holy crap I died a little on the inside.

That's a good sign. I think.

Ugh, the feels are so intense.

@ AkiVindex666
Glad it's not finished lol :)
Naww :/
Ok, hopefully soon then :)

@ SquiddyTheMouse
no it's not finished ^^ and i am really glad you like it. sorry it hasn't been updated in awhile but i have been laking motivation and i also am busy with school :( will update as soon as i can~

Is this story complete? I hope not, coz the end of chapter 17 is confusing as fuck! Wat happened? Dont get me wrong and all, coz im really glad, but why is frank still alive? What's going on here?!?!?
*confused*
Anyway, love it! Please update soon :)

I was right haha anyway I just realised what is at the bottom of the AN kinda wierd hope you up date soon

Your a really good writer but you have some typo's I don't really think that they are dead I hope you update soon

I really like this story!(: You are an amazing writter.(:

Oh Em Gerard! I absolutely love this story!! *High pitch Girl sequel* Geez your a wonderful writer :) Can't wait to read your other stories!! *Excited face*

Wow. I'm gobsmacked! It's all so...wow. You're so talented! Truly amazing update!
I'm like clinging to my screen to read more! Ahh, I love this story, more soon??:') <3

Hmm...
My other guess might be true also...

Holy crap... Frank, Mikey, Lexi and everyone died? YOU MURDERER! I AM CRYING SO HARD RIGHT NOW!!! Literally have a river of tears flowing from my eyes. Why did you have to do that?

Please tell me that the fertiles will somehow be revived? I don't think I would be able to handle it if they weren't. Even if the doms died and were reunited with them then I still wouldn't be happy because it is too sad. Please tell me that they will either be revived or they managed to et underground or something quick enough before the bombings. Okay, I'm gonna stop begging now.

Awesome job on this though, I love this story. I cry so much at it but it's still awesome. It shows how much emotion you're putting into the writing. Congratulations!

Please update soon, I really cannot wait to see what happens.

:) xo

I'm like bawling my eyes out to chapter 14:'(

I'm a smart ass when it comes to figure out a story.
>:)
Don't question my ability.
You said it was going to get good...
Therefore they will kill the leaders of the war...
So.
That means somehow all fertile's will be revived.
It's that or the Dom's die and they get reunited with their fertile.

*le throws phone*
NONONONONNOONONNONONOONO!!!!!!!!!
T~T
No...
No!
They can't die...
Unless...
:)
I see what your gonna do!!!

Nunununununoooooooooooo...
Wake up Gerard! Wake up!
:,(

:( awww

I just found this story and I could not stop reading until the end. I hope that you keep writing this great story no matter what because it is a great world that you have created and I would really like to know what happens next.

awwww :( that made me tear up D:
poor Frank xo

Awwe :/

:((( Don't make gee leave again !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!