Take a Breath - Comments

I liked Chapter 6 even though it was sad ://// but I didn't understand the last chapter at all ._.it totally confused me. I feel like I missed something..

Aw! Cuteness!
You know, I honestly did not mind that you made the sequel short. With another part coming up, it makes for a nice transition into the next part of their lives.
I'm stoked for Facing the Music, yo. It's going to be even more drama packed - I just know it.

Wow... it's over already?!
I wasn't expecting that. lol. You made the ending more rushed than I thought you were going to.
Great last two updates, though. Ooh... so Madison did end up with Nick! I knew it! And now she's engaged to him instead of Kevin... :o
This is a lot of drama. lol. And wait... Nick has a kid? With someone else? I just want to make sure I have that right.... because that's what I got from this sentence:
'He had given his virginity away not to someone he truly loved, and they now had a child as a result.'
:o So, they not only have Madison's drama to deal with, but that as well.
Amazing job with the last two updates! Again, shorter than expected, but I'm excited for the next installment! Can't wait for it! :D

aww. I had a feeling that something like that would happen. Good job. Can't wait for the next one.

Chapter 2 was good :) lol Nick is so retarded xD yet lovable actin like a player lol. Im jealous ;}
Madison is just confusing me :O I say go for Nick, he's sweet, wonderful, charming and well, you know:P

Loved the update!
Ooh... so Madison realized that she loves Nick and Kevin? :o Ooh...
And Nick was acting weird. And the way he was acting... just confused me. lol. Does he care about Kevin and Madison's relationship, or not?
Because he pretty much just told her he loved her...
Now I know why Madison's so confused. XD
Great update, though. Can't wait for more! :D

Best story ever. Jussayin'.

I was guessing it was Nick who interrupted her!
I adore how she'll call him Nicholas, or even if that's just something you do unintentionally I like it.

Oh my god! You can't leave us hanging like that. Well, you totally can, but it's cruel.
Now Madison has to be even more confused.

I honestly didn't expect that

:o
Kevin! No!
Aw... I really hope he isn't cheating. I really hope that Danielle just sent that because of the psychotic girl she is, and just because she wants him back. He can't cheat! :(
How will he explain this? What will go down when Madison confronts him about it? :o
Sorry for the delay in commenting. :/ But I finally read the update, and really can't wait for more! :D

Oh my Jonas! I don't even know what to to think.... Kevin wouldn't. Would he? And was it him that interrupted her? I shall patiently wait for answers.

Yay! A chapter to read when I'm wearing my Jonas shirt.

Cuteness insued with a young child.

Kevin is a total god of course.

And Madison having to talk to Nick sounds like a difficult conversation. Kevin has all the right not to trust her with the chemistry between her Nick.

Stoked for the next!

Loved the update! :D
Ooh... so Madison and Kevin were caught in the act, huh? Talk about awkward. XD And by Lilah and Carmen too! :P
Hm... so has Kevin cheated on her? :o Is that why he doesn't trust her?
Aha, Lilah is too cute. And Carmen is hilarious, but also a trustworthy and advice-giving friend. :) Not that she wasn't before, it's just... she proved it in this chapter. :) With all that happened and all.
Great update! Can't wait for the next! :D

I thought Nick and Madison had something when he was being gay for pay. Perverted Nick is my favorite if I was forced to pick, but still... Kevin is my numero uno Jonas. Kevin being a poopface makes this story interesting and now with suddenly straight Nick it'll escalate the stairs of awesomeness.

Loved the update! :D
Aha, okay, so the thing with Nick and Joe is cleared up. Gotcha. But ooh... is Madison falling for Nick? She blushed an awful lot in the update, when he said a few thought-provoking things. XD
And Kevin saw. Their relationship doesn't seem to be too healthy if he's been getting mad at her. :( Aw...
I hope they can work things out. But if Madison's falling for Nick, who knows what's going to happen next? :o
Great update! Can't wait for more! :D

Very cute second chapter. I knew something was up when Nick said he was gay. i can't believe kevin would think that Madison would even think of cheating on him. But all in all good chapter.
update soon?

Oh my gosh! I am so excited! It's different yet the same and the summary is just like wow! (I would make more sense if I had coffee). I want to know if they are truly meant to be together and what other twists will come with this lovely sequel.

Oh, and I adore the layout, btw. :D

Oh. My. God.
The summary alone is what pulled me in. Wow. So Nick isn't gay? I'm wondering about that, because, well, what exactly happened and why did he say that he was?
And aw, yay, in the summary you say about Kevin and Madison being together! But will it stay that way until the end? :o
And the introduction. Very interesting. It's leaving me wondering who she ends up with. OHMYGOD.
XD
So, I'm glad that you're writing this! And I'm excited to see what you have in store!
Definitely... subscribed! :D

sounds good. can't wait to read this one.
update soon?