Hey! I was surprised that I'd never seen this story on the site before! But I guess that's because you didn't update for three years. haha. :P But anyway, the idea is cool. It's actually the same basic plot I used for one of my A7X fics back in the day! :)
The only thing that throws me off is how short the chapters are. I know you said you like them, but I don't know if I have the patience to keep clicking the next page every two minutes! I'm not sure if this is something you're writing seriously (since you said you don't really like the band anymore), but one thing I would suggest is adding an extra space (hitting enter again) between paragraphs! That way it's less blocky and easier to read.
Anyway, I hope to see this updated! It seems interesting & I love Ronnie.
The only thing that throws me off is how short the chapters are. I know you said you like them, but I don't know if I have the patience to keep clicking the next page every two minutes! I'm not sure if this is something you're writing seriously (since you said you don't really like the band anymore), but one thing I would suggest is adding an extra space (hitting enter again) between paragraphs! That way it's less blocky and easier to read.
Anyway, I hope to see this updated! It seems interesting & I love Ronnie.