Dependent on Life. - Comments

You really weren't kidding when you said that shit's gonna hit the fan. haha. Loved the final chapter!

I'm glad that you didn't kill Jimmy like you said. That's so sad that Michelle lost her child..but maybe her and Brian can try again? It's also sad that you killed Mandy and the kids, but at least you didn't kill Lucas. Although you did move him 374 miles away.. I hope someone finds Xavier and Malak soon before they come back to ruin Jasmine's life again.

Can't wait for Cruel Fate!!

Why is it over.....Update the next one! :D

Not Jimmy!!! You said he was going to live!! I hope Jasmine is ok and safe, but like Jimmy was saying, I have a bad feeling about it.

JIMMY!!!!!!!! you said he wasn't gonna die right?

JIMMY NO! :'(

..... YAY! They're finally together! XD

I love that!! Now Jasmine and Lucas know that they feel the same way about each other.

Yay Luke And Jas foRever! :'D

YESH! Brian gets a gun!! Yeahh!!! Thank goodness for sequels. What would we do without them? Oh, Val and Brian would make the best ass kicking team ever

I'm glad someone got their a**es kicked!!!!

I wanted to wait with the comments until i read ever single chapter. I love this story so much! I would so love if the Avenged Guys were my uncles and fathers haha. I'm glad sum kicked Malak's ass glad is was Matt. He is so grrr and aggressive but sweet and cuddly. Lucas and Jasmine so cute!!

Val. For some reason Michelle seems just too nice. But I could be wrong.
Brian and Matt would be killing someone? If so... Matt seems like he could hold up better in jail
Buuuuuuut I really don't want them to kill someone and be put in jail.
Don't make them get put in jail :( Jail's a sad place
I'd still have to say Matthew Charles. (Gah I love his full name x3)

LOVE CHAP 27!!! Aww! Lucas + Jasmine = Forever!!!

I don't wanna make a hard decisions.....but OMG this chapter was good!

Love this story! Your writing is addicting! Jasmine is an awesome character and I love how you wrote a7x... they seem to be like that in real life.:) as to your author note in Chap 26....
1. Lucas should fight Xavier, it'd be a cute way for his feelings for her to come out.
2. Johnny should kick Malak's ass, since Jasmine confided in hom about Malak.
3. Val should kick Jasmine's ass, cause Val is just awesome.
4. Brian should be the one that shoots someone to save Jasmine, he seems to be the closest to her besides Jimmy... Matt could do it too though.
Anyway, again, love this story... You're AWESOME! and keep the chapters coming... please. ;)

I say they all just go kick some ass. But Brian does look pretty hot with a gun....

For 1 and 2: both For 3: all 3 For 4: I don't know...

I'm glad that Jasmine's good enough to go home and I hope she's ok. As for Amie, that's tough to go through but I hope she heals up well. If it was Xavier that did do that to Amie and her mom, then he took it WAY too far! He deserves to get his a** kicked to Pluto!

Too Many Choices! Just update!

I was upset when you said Jasmine was dead, but happy again when the doctor said that she was alive. I love how Amie nearly strangled the doctor! That was hilariously awesome. I like Jimmy's dream. It not only gives more depth to his past but it also shows how much he loves Tayala.

Jimmy may be gone, but he'll NEVER be forgotten!!