"But, he didn't win." put a smile to my face. She should know that Jamie loves her more than anyone and the way she is behaving is because Michael is doing the same to her. I hope he ends up alone.
what the actual fuck?! Ok... how can she 'love' him after all he did or less depend on him? I thought she would have been relived after he started ignoring her. Anyway, it would be good if you did a POV on Michel... just to see what he really thinks ^^
I just spent about two hours reading your story and I have to tell you that I absolutely love it. You write amazingly and the idea is so creative. I like how you're able to describe everything she's feeling and why she's doing what she's doing. Keep up the awesome work(:
Love your story :] You know, I have the exact same story plot as you a while back but I was a tad bit lazy to materialize my idea and I wasn't feeling very confident in writing a convincing story. But now, I've seen the master at work and it inspires me to persevere on in my later ideas!
This is the only story I've come across so far on Mibba that didn't gave me an, "Uh... that doesn't even make sense" or "Wow, what a quick change of attitude" and "Okay... the things the character said and do is a little awkward/not right if it were to be real and acted out".
I love how Michael is so real and you can totally picture his thinking process. So... the main point is... UPDATE SOON PLEASE! <3
It's really good! It would be really awesome if you made a custom layout too though. Anyway, I can't wait for the next update! Update soon! Please and thank you!