If the Suspense Doesn't Kill Us, Something Else Will - Comments

Her name should be Alex and Mikey should love her.

I get so excited when you update.

Aaaaalso, I think you should work a little on your description. What's Mandy look like?

Oh what a turn for the books! So these creatures can imitate anybody? Well there's a horrible spanner in the works! Who do you trust from now? The horrible paranoia they must all be feeling, especially now that they're forced to stay in such close confinement. i really am enjoying how you're building this story up, and the sweet little romance (and gentleman Gerard) is such a wonderful contrast. Can't wait for more.

Aw yay you updated!!! I love this story, the suspense is killing me

I was so excited when I got the email after getting home. You don't even know.

The last chapter made me laugh, lol. Naughty Gerard. XD

THAT'S SO CREEPY THOUGH D:

Watch the grudge.
The only old scary movie that legit still scares me.

I'm sorry it took me so long to read this.
Just know that I love the hell out of it and I hope you get some inspiration because I'll be sad if this ends up discarded.

If you want, you could throw some AlexXMikey action in there, maybe it would give you some inspiration or incentive or something to that effect. :3

That was sweet of him. I wonder if he'll try to make another move. Seriously love your story so much.

I'm really enjoying the premise of this story so far, it's very interesting, I've never seen a sort of Killjoy-ish story done in this manner, I am thoroughly intrigued, also I'm really liking your Gerard character so far, he's pretty awesome. I really can't wait to see where you go with this. There's so much potential.

I feel like I'm going to enjoy this story - I was referred by Schizzy. But yeah. Proper comment soon (:

Every time you update I die a little inside, but in a good way! I love how protective Gerard is. Mikey seems careless and just meh.

Giggles. I was laughing at the end. Especially with the shampoo bit.

Of course I had to advertise this story! It's just so lovely. I love your writing.

One thing I noticed: Meanwhile I was stood there bored of all their yelling, maybe you meant just, or was standing?

But, I thought that, overall, this chapter was hilarious. Relieves some of that tension. You know?
Lay off my Mikey XD

Oh my goodness. First of all your writing is WONDERFUL. This story is original and enticing. And thank you so much for mentioning my story. :)

OMG BRO. THAT'S MY STORY. OMG. OMG. OMG. OMG. I LOVE YOU BROSKI. MUCH LOVE. MUCHAS AMOR.

:D

So, your story has this awesome element of creepy in it. Like, when you were talking about how smart the draculoids were, I was just like, woah. I'm sitting here biting my nails like, THEY GONNA STEAL HER D:

And, poor Gerard.
He sounds like he smells good, lol.

MIKEY I LOVE YOU D=

OMFGEE!!! I <3s IT!!! It's horror, romance, AND Gerard!!! All at once!! With like NO SPELLING/GRAMMATICAL ERRORS!!! AGAIN, OMFGEE!!! (In case you couldn't tell, I REALLY like this story so far;) I. Cannot. Fudging. WAIT!! PLEEEEEZZZEE UPDATE!!! D: I'll die if you don't. Okay not really, but I would totally be smiling like a moron for a while if you did! (NOT JOKING HERE.) [Hurriedly subscribes to story] Thank you!!

Scary. I feel for the girl, too. I would have been freaking out if one of those things were there.

I am in love with this, different and refreshing! Please continue xx

The layout is so amazing!! It looks really good and it gives the story a creeoy vibe, I adore it.

The story summery is really nice. I like how you added passages from the newspaper and provided detail about the creatures. It sounds like it will shape into a really great strory without the usualy cliche vampire theme.

I'm going to subscribe to this because I want to read more when you update it!

The layout really kinda creeps me out xD

Oh my gosh, the summary. It's creepy, but it's hooking!!! I can't really read it though because me? Not my kind of story :/

This is good though, I think you should continue on :D I'll come check back when there are a few more chapters.

First of all-- OMFG OMFG OMFG MY CHEMICAL ROMANCE!!!!!!!!!!

I find myself, currently, not reading any, which I find strange. And, omfg. That bald guy. I hate him. I hate him I hate him I hate him. Gah.

From there, WTF ARE DRACULOIDS??? Lmao. You've already caught my interest. How could you not? Anything slightly vampire related always immediately catches my interest.

I am already so into this, and it's just a summary. Because ... Well I already stated my opinions haha. I do like your layout, it's simple and inviting. :) you better hurry and post that first chapter. I must read more.