All In His Actions - Comments

flyersfanatic10 (100)

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Ok, I'm not even a fan of Jordan and I seriously just bawled because of the ending. That was just the cruelest way to end that story. Now I need to find a happily-ever-after story to take my mind off of it.

June 10th, 2014 at 07:05pm

kateerose12345 (100)

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Make it 10 times now and it still makes me cry. Best story I've ever read.

May 27th, 2014 at 03:54am

kateerose12345 (100)

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I've read this story like 5 times now and I still bawl like a baby every time

July 11th, 2013 at 05:24am

slumflower (100)

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The ending just literally broke my heart, like fuck.

May 4th, 2013 at 03:37am

MusicLover525 (100)

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How cruel! :O Noo! They were perfect together! Why did he have to die?! D: I'm devastated! It took them so long to finally be a couple and then you just cut there time short?! :'( that's sad! Jordan imagined their whole future: happily married, a boy and a girl, laughter..! :((
Nonetheless beautifully written! :)

June 8th, 2012 at 02:31pm

kateerose12345 (100)

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I don't get why Tyler said to go get Jordan back but he died long ago...

April 30th, 2012 at 02:56am

lyz_skinner11 (100)

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Whyyyyyyy? :( Why'd you make it end that waaayyyy! :'( I'm sooo crushed :( <3

April 20th, 2012 at 05:10am

ag008 (100)

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Why?! Why did you do that?

Other than the way you ended it, I loved the story! It truly was great!

March 21st, 2012 at 12:19am

abbis69 (100)

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Wow. The ending made me bawl. Can't believe Jordan dies. Was not expecting that. Makes me sad.

March 6th, 2012 at 06:11am

july100 (100)

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Your a very good writer....but I'm going to pretend the ending was different. :) I'm going to think that the epilogue never happened and they lived happily ever after. Hehe

March 1st, 2012 at 04:02am

Penguins11 (100)

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Oh my God; I just read this entire story, and not gonna lie I wanted to bawl at the end of it! :( It was so sad, and I didn't see that coming at all! Beautifully written story though; you did an amazing job of it!

February 26th, 2012 at 09:55pm

Gronk's Girl (100)

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are you kidding me. this story was amazing, but the ending.... i cried! if anything like this ever happens to jord in real life... oh my god. i can't get over the ending. oh my god.

February 16th, 2012 at 02:16am

BecauseItsTheCup (100)

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Yeah, same. I'm PMSing too. Bawling my eyes out is definately not the best thing right now...........

January 20th, 2012 at 04:35am

soccerlala (100)

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He just dies?????????

January 17th, 2012 at 06:32am

Nyx007 (100)

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I don't think you understand the problem I'm having here, woman. I'm on my period and my roommate is in the room right now, restricting me from just sobbing right now. You can't whip out things like that on me right now. I'm gonna end up crying myself to sleep tonight. Thanks.

January 16th, 2012 at 07:41am