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  • who owns my heart

    who owns my heart (100)

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    Oh dear Lord, this is amazing. "You'll never take me alive!" I believe I said that once... but I was being chased by teachers because I was trying to ditch math. My parents weren't amused. But I was in the seventh grade, so it's only fair that I was an idiot. For some reason, I just love this. And yes, I found out about it through that finished thread thing. But the minute I read the summary, I was thought to myself, I have to see how she writes this. It's a great idea. And I'm really glad I did. This is my awkward comment.
    October 17th, 2010 at 04:21pm
  • the apex predator;;

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    Oh, that was just so sweet. I totally have a journal for my "Brendon" (obviously he's not Brendon, but he's the guy I love like crazy and adore writing about so I suppose I could call him that) and it sounds a lot like this because my life is pretty much a comedy show, so in the journal he's always doing crazy stuff like this XD

    You can write anything :)
    April 27th, 2010 at 11:32am
  • Cyanide.

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    lmao. thats adorable. :tehe:
    May 4th, 2008 at 03:03pm
  • the antihero.

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    I'm incapable of writing reviews as it is
    Let alone when I'm giggling like... well, like I can imagine a sugar high Brendon giggling :tehe:

    Brilliant. Nuff said.
    March 27th, 2008 at 02:33pm
  • Siriano;

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    "Ice cream!?" Wow

    :lmfao So freakin' funny.
    Brilliant Dru.
    March 11th, 2008 at 08:50pm
  • Caliban

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    Very cute. Like, laugh out loud cute. That's hard to do, especially when I'm in one of my moods, so congratulations. You are officially amazing.
    March 11th, 2008 at 03:31am
  • oxford comma.

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    Brendon is very spastic and definitely a melodramatic sugar addict in this, so the title fits quite nicely.
    I like how the humor was definitely there, but no slapstick.

    My favorite lines:

    "Liar!"

    "Oh, that's your plan, is it?" the boy asked, narrowing his eyes at her. "Give me a blowjob so I run out of strength and can't run from the FBI guys."

    "The FBI doesn't arrest people for having shitty wardrobes and being addicted to sugar, Brendon."
    March 11th, 2008 at 02:13am
  • dearest helpless

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    “YOU’LL NEVER TAKE ME ALIVE!” Brendon screamed, diving into a pile of leaves.

    :lmfao That was my favorite line and now I can't stop laughing because of the mental imagery. Fantastic as usual.
    March 11th, 2008 at 01:21am
  • we are galaxies.

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    OMFG. :tehe:

    You pulled it off so well. I could see everything really really good.
    Especially the YOU'LL NEVER TAKE ME ALIVE part.

    And how Brendon is just so... brendon. IDK how to explain it.

    It's hard for me to leave a decent review because it's so damn cute.
    March 11th, 2008 at 12:17am
  • Jepha Howard.

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    :lmfao
    Dru, that was Brill.
    I don't care who you are.
    Perrrrfect idea. :arms:
    March 11th, 2008 at 12:13am
  • folie a dru.

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    New story/drabble.
    Dru/Brendon [Druden].
    Idea credited to Kristen.
    Comedy.
    489 words.

    Happy reading!

    xoxox
    -Dru
    March 11th, 2008 at 12:07am
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