How to Save a Life - Comments

I just love the layout! It's wonderful.

The excerpt in the summary is a good choice. It's intriguing but not too revealing. And ooh, an arranged marriage story! It's a ridiculous cliche but I liked reading that sort of stuff before.

I like the prologue. It's well-written and I can really imagine the girl doing ballet. Can't wait for more! :)

Oh that was so pretty and beautiful and lovely and I was RIGHT THERE with that little girl. xD
I completely love the layout, and the musical border.

I want to make a note to ZOFL!, commenting on your own story in reply to us doesn't let us know >_< So that's like a moot point. You're commenting on your own story, and unless we come back and regularly check the comments, we would never know.

Anyways this is lovely, and I'm stoked for more. :3

Hey guys! Thanks for the feedback and all. It's greatt ^_^
Just thought I'd let you know nothing has been posted yet because my co-author has been M.I.A for about a month now.
Don't give up on us yet! Thanks :D

Pretty layouutt <3

I agree with eight letters late., I'm not sure if I like the musical border either. xP

The summary is wonderfully interesting! I like the guy already, he seems very playful and sarcastic xD

The story seems like it will be very musical, and it seems interesting. You will definitely pull a lot of people in on this :)

The layout it pretty. I'm not sure if I like the musical border, but I do like the banner. The summary is so cute! It's just a bit of dialogue but it makes me want to read this, aha. I'm subbing! I hope you update it soon. <3

First I gotta say
Love the layout
Also I'm loving the title

I love the summary you got
I can't wait to see what the first chapter is about.
Woo!!

You got a great start
Keep up the good work
<3

I love the layout it's very pretty and the banner is cute. :) I like the summary too it made me laugh. Not to sure what this will turn out to be like but it sounds likes it's going to be awesome. The side bar with the music notes is pretty! I love the song that this is based off of too so I'm interested to see what this will be like. :) Good job so far.

Your layout is beautiful, it's not over the top and the side bar thing really does match with the banner, I'm guessing this is going to be a music based kinda story? :3 The summary is totally adorable and ahah at the guy teasing her about being a klutz. Just a tip though, you shouldn't have a period if there's a dialogue tag (he said/she said etc.) after. Instead of a period when there's a dialogue tag , put a comma instead :3

This is shaping up to be an adorable story already :3

I like the layout it's not ostentatious or ick. Can't wait to read.

The summary is adorable and totally made me laugh when she couldn't keep her balance. At first I was just assuming he was being a dick about her not having money, but then when she could hardly walk. That was so cute. Definitely interested in reading this.

I really love the layout and the title. They are so brilliant.

I really can't wait to see what this story is about. You have made your characters seem so tough and defensive, and I really want to get to know who they are more. I'm sure that they will make this story interesting.

Hope that you post the first chapter soon!

The layout is brilliant and amazing. I'm jealous ;D I'm gonna watch out for this story, so yeah, I'm subscribing. The summary was interesting, but something didn't seen right to me.

before spinning around and sprinting out of the library and out the back door. If she's out the library, where the hell did the back door come from? Yeah, that's all that was slightly weird about the summary :x