February 8th, 2012 at 05:55am
If I was El, I would have went running back to that beautiful man. But he's such a dick! Guys that break up with their girlfriend so they could be single and then just end up in a relationship are ASSHOLE. And the fact that he's wanting her back happens all the time. God, I relate with this story so much!
Also, more twist and shit should happen. Maybe El getting tired of him and playing him this time. Hooking up with him and shit all while talking to another guy. Whenever you need drama in a story just bring in a new love interest. Jealous is always the best medicine for drama (;
But I love him!
But he's a jerk.
I want her to be with him, but I also want the story to be long. :D