Wow...Um...I'm not sure what to say. I can't say it's a great chapter because it sucks. Not the writing, but what happened. It sucks a lot, but it's not a bad chapter. I can't explain myself...
Hey, where is the rest now? I know you didn't really want me reading anything you wrote, but I'm getting a feel for your writing style now. Granted it's only half a story xD As will ours. I know you have a thing for shitty endings, but can like. no one die? Just for this story? And ours of course xD I loveeee it though ;D