Te Quiero - Comments

Hello. :) I'm here again to comment on one of your stories Cali_cookies. :)

You two did a great job with the plot and I just loved the spanish parts. I think they added to the story.
I also liked the characters you created, especially the guys personalities.

Upon reading sometimes I thought WTF is going on? Like when her brother had sex with her mom and even when they had sex as brother and sister and how their mother accepted that. Even when she wanted her brother's baby.
Strange but there are situations like that in real life and guys who have it easy for the thing between their legs, lol. That made the story realistic in a unique and kinky way.

Anyways, back to the story... I liked the complicated emotions and the way you described them.
You made every chapter interesting and left me want to read more, the result being I read two of your stories today. One being this and the other, the one I will comment next. :)

What was mising was a bit of descriptions here and there, and writing typos. Plus a summary. You have great plot, why not add a great summary too? :)

All in all, I was once again amazed by the amazing plot line.

~Marian.

Wat happened to the second part? ???

I finally finished this story, yay they got married

hee hee, they're getting married ☺

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AWWW their getting married

Sounds interesting and love the hostility between brother and sister and the descriptions of what they go through. I guess you both already put the translations of what they're saying in the later chapters, but might want to go back to the beginning and add the translations as well. Can't wait to read more of this.

Shit hit the fan

Amazing need an update :)

FUCK!?!?!

The

What?

Aww.

FINALLY!
been craving that chapter.

FINALLY!
been craving that chapter.

-_-

Ha.
That's such a good guy.

Dx
D:
What the Fuck?
Like really?
That BITCH AND MAN WHORE!
I hope she does find someone better than him.
She has a bun in the oven.
OF FUCKING COURSE SHES GONNA BE WALKING DRAMA!

PAGE CLAIM!

Cue the violins.
She really needs to put her foot down and tell him she'll take his son with her and she won't hesitate.
Cause that's not the best environment for a baby to grow up in.
And demon needs to grow a pair and be a man.
Cause a man listens to what his girl has to say.