Words I Might Have Ate - Comments

@ aubs
Thank you :)

I was really sad and disappointed by the end of the one-shot. What he said to her just made me angry, and I can honestly say that I was shaking my head a few times throughout the piece. I guess it just made me mad that he was so, what's the word, uncaring even though, deep down, he really cared for her.

But I really enjoyed reading this. I liked the small details that you added, like the way her hair smelled and the flashback of them as children. It was very heartbreaking, but kind of cute (in some places) as well. Amazing work!

I really liked the part about the mermaid. That was really cute and I wasn't expecting something like that throw in. It gave me butterflies. Good job. (:

I really liked this :O I liked how you followed the song and included it in the story :) I like how you used a lot of details in your writing. Also, I thought the part about Billie pouring water over her head was really cute :P I think that your layout is really unique, as well. Anyways, I really liked how you interpreted the song into a one-shot. Good luck with the contest :)