SpanGLEEish - Comments

I like that you changed the song. I feel like it fits better :)

Comment swap here :) I felt so bad when Aelena had to leave her school and go to the annoying high school. Man, if somebody chucked a slushie on me, I'd bost their nose for them xD I love Santana's nickname, it's very suitable for her :P Rory seems really cool and neat :)

I SHIP RORY AND REINA

Not bad. the title was perfect for the story, and the tone was perfect for the title! I loved the last paragraph, it showed a real friendship drunk with happiness! after all, they are young. (LOL) I liked the way you made it so that Santana has the same "Jerk!" part to her as in the show.
but I was not exactly onboard with the way that Reina is starting to get the same attitude as Santana, and I would like it if you would gravitate farther away from that.
Selena's backstory is especially unique, I like the idea that her mother is deported, it adds a bit of drama that a great story has! looking forward to more!

Great job! I loved the first two glee seasons. This was well written, you managed to keep it funny, entertaining and it had a nice flow. You could really get into the main character. You did a great job of setting the tone of the story too. So overall.. good job!

OH MY GOD I LOVE THIS SO Much! <3333
I think the title for this genious 8) It suits it very well. My favorite line in the whole story would be found in chapter one: “Did I know of this other family? No. That’s a Mexican for you" this made me laugh so hard and obnoxiously (or however the heck you spell it) I actually woke, the neighbor. Ha that is what you get for complaining about me dribbling a basketball at 2:30 in the Afternoon. Sorry, I got a litt- alot off topic. Now back to the story. I love this and you are an excellent writer! Keep up the great work

I think the title for this is so clever and I really like it! It almost made me laugh.

I'm not positive if Selena is a part of the original cast or not, but I like the character of her that you created. I think she has a really interesting back story, especially with her mother being deported. I don't think I've ever seen that in a story before, so I thought that part was really unique and interesting.

I felt so bad when her grandmother died! It was so sad and her dad wasn't even that nice about the whole tihng!

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I've watched a bit of glee but not enough to understand or recognize characters. Nonetheless in here I found myself understanding and enjoying this fan fic even if I didn't know the characters before. I really liked Reina. Its a pity this is on hold. Great job!

I was brought here from comment swap :) I love how you made Santana as much of a jerk as she is in the show!!! This story is written really well and I would like to read the next chapter soon!!! Reina is a great character, but I'm not liking how she is starting to get Santana's attitude.
You should put Reina and Rory together :)

This was a beautifully written story. You've created such a wonderful story line, and it's really intrigued me. The characters you've created are flawless, and have unbelievably intriguing personalities as well. Considering I don't watch Glee, I felt as if I got to really know the character in the beginning so I wasn't completely lost during the entire thing. You're a very talented writer, keep up the amazing work! I do hope that you continue this sometimes. I think a lot of us have really enjoyed it.

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I like the sisterly relationship between Reina and Santana. She is a fiesty, strong character who is able to stand on her own two feet and is well-written. I've never really seen Glee in about 3 months or so am a bit fandom blind. From what I remember you've kept the characters in character, especially Santana in this chapter.. I was unsure as to whether the two were sisters but it seems to have been clarified.

Your MC is interesting, while still holding her own as a character.. You have a good use of the first person narrative which is my fave to write in and read from. I'm looking forward to reading on and seeing where this story goes. :)

I've never watched even one episode of Glee so I read this story, thinking in my head that it's an original story.

I like the way you introduce the character and jump into the story without any beating around the bush. I like how straight forward you are with this story.

I like this Reina character. She seems nice but at the same time strong enough not to take Santana's bullshit. I like that. Most stories I read about sister rivalry is that one of them is always so weak and not able to fight for themselves. But Reina is different.

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I am a GLEEK, I’m not ashamed to say. I really did enjoy this story. Great work. I like how you portrayed Santana, I have never liked her. I would love to see more sisterly interactions between Reina and Santana. I love first person stories. Great work.

I'm not much of a GLEE fan, but this is really good c:

Comment swap never fails me, I swear! xD I found out this is on hold? (status?)

Well, it makes me sad :c Oh well, what are ya going to do? Anyhow, this is brilliant in every type of way. I love the layout, and I love how you never failed to write a long chapter xD

I probably sound like a kiss-ass brown noser, sorry :P Buut, this is seriously good. If I had to pick any GLEE story on here, it would be yours c:

~Hallie

I think the author knows best, let it be natural if you don't know with the whole romance thing and the fight thing fits the story. Let the characters speak for Them selves and let the story develope or something like that. More soon please ^^

No worries... Since it's still active ^.^

no comments?? oh well I hope this will be a welcomed change then =) I'm already reading one of your other stories, then I saw this one and decided to chack it out. So far, it seems to be pretty good and I have decided to give a shot and I'm subscribing in the matter of seconds. Looking forward to more =)