I love the setting. It's not something too common on here at all. The layout is wonderful and I'm in LOVE with the originality. I didn't notice any grammatical errors or anything of the sort, either, so that was a huge gold star to you in my book. Victoria is a beautiful name so as lame as it sounds, it made me happy to see it. The dialogue went along smoothly, as well. Don't give up writing, you're wonderful at it. <3
November 3rd, 2012 at 02:52am