Finding Daddy - Comments

Freaking awesome!

It's just like Jimmy to talk some sense in to Matt. Though I'm kind of surprised she didn't get caught eavesdropping.

loved the update
wonder what the ring is about now

Wow. The fight was perfect. I’ll definitely be following your work. The conversation was perfect real. You obviously have an idea what you’re talking about. And it wasn’t boring, not for a second. I loved that you did bore us with unnecessary background information. Good job.
Typos:
Once in awhile (a while) I would push something around with my fork.
“What is that suppose (supposed) to mean?” She spat.

Wow that fucked up. He shouldn't have said that to Danny. I understand he worried that someone might try to use her but that was just messed up. You stopped at the best part though!

Aww. Poor Danny. :(
Matt didn't have to make it a big BIG deal..,
Please update soon!!

Poor Danny!!! Matt is a definite meanie face!! Looking forward to more :)

loved the update. happy Charlie came around to her. wonder what Matt try to find more out on Felix. can't wait for more

N'aww, look at Matt being all protective of her, it's so sweet and cute! They're starting to grow into a proper father/daughter relationship now without being awkward around each other, I like that :)

Way to go Val for being the cool step-parent/best friend!

Hallelujah, praise the lord Charlie finally took his head out of his ass and realised his life would be a lot easier if he just talks to Charlie. See, wasn't so hard was it buddy? XD

Omg, Edgar sounds adorable! Maybe he and Autumn can come and visit Danny soon? I like Autumn, she's so quirky and weird, but that's why I love her so much!

I'd like to see her friendship with Felix develop more, maybe even a spot of romance between them? I'm hoping he can see past her being younger than him, they would make a cute couple, and it would also cause Matt to freak out some more, which I think is hilarious! Lol.

Overall, good update! It wasn't too short at all :)

Also, congrats on the new job!

Looking forward to the next instalment! :D

Glad Charlie isn't gonna be an ass anymore!
Matt shouldn't be too upset about Danny talking to a guy..
Congrats on the job!! :)
Please update soon!!

YES, THANK YOU!

I was smiling throughout the whole argument between Matt and Danielle. I was totally rooting for that, lmao. AND IT HAPPENED.

Also, happy that Charlie isn't being a little -- anymore.
Buuut! The question is... how long is it going to last?

I'm glad Charlie came to his senses. I knew Matt would freak out the minute she got into the car.

More soon please love this

Yay Charlie is going to be good now!!! And lol at Matt being all protective. Congrats on the job and looking forward to more :)

Okay is it bad that I saw this had been updated and actually jumped up and did a happy dance? Because I totally did.

All I have to say is that this was fuckin' amazing!!! I can't wait to see what happens next, although I am curious about what Matt thinks of that kid, and how he seems to know so much about him...

I want answers, and I want them now. No, scratch that, I want them ten minutes ago...

<3

Update soon

I'm finally all caught up this this! :D

I love it. I love that she plucked up the courage to track her father down, her mother is just ugh. She needs to go and faceplant a shovel! I love how close her and Autumn are, and also sad that she had to go back to Colorado! :(

I love Brian and his daughter, Gates and mini Gates! Yeah! :D

I can understand where Charlie is coming from, this girl who he doesn't know from Adam comes into his home and his life and says she's his half sister, that's pretty big. Apart from all the other fakes that caused him to build protective walls around himself, he now has to share his dad with someone else. I don't blame him for being how he is. But does he have to be such an ass about it? If he just swallowed his pride and talked and actually listened to Danny maybe they could find some sort of common ground maybe.

I love Jimmy, he'a awesome as always!

How adorable is baby Xavier? Too cute man.

I can see Matt giving her the whole "you're too young to be hanging out with older boys young lady" talk when they get home, bless him. I love Matt. I'm hoping that maybe she will go off with Felix somewhere for the day and Matt will be freaking out like the typical over protective dad and the rest of the guys will be trying to calm him down lol.

Looking forward to the next instalment! Take as much time as you need though :)

loved the updates
wonder if matt is going to want to find more out about Felix?
can't wait for more

Glad Danny had a talk with Charlie. Hopefully it has cleared some between them...
Can't wait to read more! :)

I wish Charlie would just accept her!!! And I love Felix!! Looking forward to more :)