awww that was so beautiful love. Amazing job. I am so proud :)
December 19th, 2011 at 09:26am
This is so beautiful.
I especially love how you talking about their phones so much and them calling each other, the line "like indecision to call you and hear your voice of treason" is one of my favorite lines from that song and that album as a whole. It made me really happy that you talked about that.
I also liked how you made it from both points of view, to show they both missed each other and were unhappy without each other. It fits really well with the song, and I liked how the ending was happy. I like to think of this song as a love song, though it is sad, and I think this story embodies that really, really well.
Thank you so much for writing this. I love it :3
