Trading Heartbeats - Comments

  • Jalexjagked

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    It took me two days to finish this but jfc it was totally worth it. Aw yes, I definitely want an epilogue! I'm excited to here what becomes of them. This was amazing! :)
    December 21st, 2011 at 08:17am
  • sourwolf.

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    longest one shot i have read on Mibba.
    totally worth it though, 'cause it was awesome<3
    and i love the baby's name :3

    i would love to read an epilogue :D

    and since you're an awesome writer,
    i'm going to go check out your other stories(:
    December 21st, 2011 at 04:23am
  • n.oxious

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    I..... I don't know what to say.
    "And he's cold, but he keeps you warm because his love still burns for you, and you don't know what's in store, but you both know what is true."
    I feel it fit the situation.
    <3
    Perfect
    Absolutely perfect.
    An epilogue would be a splendid idea.
    <3
    December 21st, 2011 at 02:07am
  • No Tomorrow

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    Holy fucking shit.
    Mind = blown.
    You know better than anyone how much I love Martin and Zack...
    But THIS?!?!?
    Perfection. Complete and utter perfection.
    I bow down to your superb writing skills =]

    p.s. yes, I would read an epilogue. You don't even have to ask ;)
    December 20th, 2011 at 09:43pm
  • rebeccs13

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    oh and yes, epilogue would be very nice :3
    December 20th, 2011 at 08:31pm
  • rebeccs13

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    holy crap this is so amazing and i really love the emotion in the bits where martin is with john and zack gets upset because that was the first bit in the story where i was like hey, zack isn't just an asshole! omg martins family is the best and his new family and i just love this so much <3
    December 20th, 2011 at 08:31pm
  • emmarulez

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    Holy hell that was long. I just spent an hour or more reading it.
    But omfg it was amazing ahhhhhhh.
    Yes I would love an epilogue to this, are you nuts? That shouldn't even be a question. <3
    December 20th, 2011 at 07:41pm
  • heyJAYhey

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    This was actually amazing! So well written and completely adorable! Please please please write an epilogue =]
    December 20th, 2011 at 05:29pm
  • Ace Lightning.

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    HOLY SHIT THIS WAS AMAZING
    SERIOUSLY
    CAN WE HAVE MORE?
    PLZ PLZ PLZPLZ
    December 20th, 2011 at 04:19pm
  • kissandsell;

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    fuck oh my god you knew how excited i was for this and it was more than i imagined, it was perfect and cute and martin and zack are my new otp seriously, it was beautiful and i would love an epilogue jesus christ i'm going to read i all over again now i love you
    December 20th, 2011 at 02:56pm
  • forevermine

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    I'm speechless. That was amazing and perfect. You should totally do an epilogue! No doubt it'd be amazing as well.
    December 20th, 2011 at 02:30pm
  • Leaaaaaaaah.

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    That was the longest oneshot i've ever read but every part was worth it. it was so cute, oh my god, totally great and I think you should do the epilogue.
    December 20th, 2011 at 11:03am
  • JessLoui

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    omg that story was amazing
    you are like the most brilliant writer ever
    and i beg of you...please do an epilogue...please??
    December 20th, 2011 at 09:35am
  • Tattoo

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    I'm so happy Zack and Alex ended up together in the end :D
    I would definitely love to read an epilogue to this :)
    This story was SO amazing <3
    December 20th, 2011 at 09:02am
  • kyleburns

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    I'll comment on here too, because this fic deserves so much freaking love. Great job!
    December 20th, 2011 at 07:41am
  • Ashie.Lexia

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    Amazing and perfect and just kdjflnkfas.

    I'm not being very constructive, but it's just so hjgkdsdajf

    Words cannot describe my emotions about this story at the moment.

    Just pure sdljkfsanmvzx
    December 20th, 2011 at 07:34am
  • s t a y y o u n g .

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    I'm very excited about this! Can't wait! (: Love the pairings too!
    December 11th, 2011 at 12:38am
  • kew_atl

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    Ohhhh! This sounds like it's gonna be good!
    November 27th, 2011 at 09:27pm
  • alltimezach

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    Guess who's excited = D:
    November 27th, 2011 at 08:53pm
  • Tattoo

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    I'm so excited for this to start :D
    November 27th, 2011 at 08:35pm