Trading Heartbeats - Comments

  • mbphan

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    this is an older fic, but I found it just a bit ago and just finished ready it a second time. It is amazing! I am not a huge mpreg fan but this story is wonderful :) Just thought you should know!
    January 5th, 2016 at 03:22am
  • AnimalAnnise

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    This was truly great I have a weakness for mpreg a and yours kept me interested the whole time!!
    February 26th, 2014 at 08:23am
  • TimeToFly3

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    Every single story I have read from you has turned out perfect. Please write on epilogue even though it has been forever since you actually wrote this but I would love to see on epilogue for this.
    February 17th, 2014 at 07:56am
  • GirlWithFlowerDress

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    can one die because of cuteness? if so i just did! your writing is amazing and your stories are so cute and everythign! this was just totally adorable! i loved it! thank you so much for writing this!
    February 24th, 2013 at 09:59pm
  • mixtape-of-her-bands

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    I don't know how you do it but I love every story you ever wrote! this was so cute and I 'aww'-ed all the time. :)
    February 10th, 2013 at 09:20pm
  • f0reverbr0ken

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    I just reread this again. I love all your fics and would still love to see an epilogue even though it's like a year since you wrote this lol
    November 10th, 2012 at 02:50am
  • stolen_from_my_eyes.

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    hey I just met you
    and this is crazy
    I love your stories
    especially when there's a baby
    Loved this so much. Seriously. Like. Can that be my life?
    November 2nd, 2012 at 04:15am
  • Deputy Heart Eyes

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    Oh my gosh! So cute and perfect and....
    Please tell me that epilogue exists or is working on being existing? Because I need it in my life!!!!!

    -kayt
    October 20th, 2012 at 06:02am
  • f0reverbr0ken

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    Hi, I know you finished this 8months ago but did you ever write the epilogue or still want to? I would love to see what they're doing now.
    August 27th, 2012 at 08:07am
  • Death-by-Hair-Dye

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    So I just started reading this -not done- ill get back to you on that, but I just had to pause and say how amazing this is and how cute Martin was when he freaked out over the message from John. :) just got to that part, and I dunno, but I totally played that out in my head (like a freak) and I could totally see Martin's voice cracking when he was all like, "Jack? Help me." haha anywho, this is amazing. I want a sequel and I'm not even done reading yet lol
    May 21st, 2012 at 12:48am
  • Snowfall Melody

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    WoW I loved that it was so adorable. I'd read an epilouge
    January 20th, 2012 at 10:20pm
  • prettyxinxyourxpain

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    An epilogue is definitely required. I loved this. I loved how they went from hating each other to loving each other. It was all written and spaced out so perfectly. You rock.
    January 11th, 2012 at 03:21am
  • whiskey_princess

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    This was actually amazing.. but of course it was because you wrote it! and i would love to have more of this! :D
    December 26th, 2011 at 01:40pm
  • whiskey_princess

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    This was actually amazing.. but of course it was because you wrote it! and i would love to have more of this! :D
    December 26th, 2011 at 01:40pm
  • Tanya. Please detele

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    I positively LOVED how long this was, all oneshots should be like this! Amazing writing and please, an epilogue!
    December 23rd, 2011 at 08:41pm
  • Furthermore

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    omg.....best 1 chapter fic ever. i swear.!!! your should totally do an epilogue!! eeep. so excited.
    December 23rd, 2011 at 05:57pm
  • kew_atl

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    This took me forever to read but it was so worth it! I absolutely loved it! I would for sure read an epilogue!
    December 22nd, 2011 at 01:26am
  • imagine.

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    Fuck that was long! But amazing (:
    December 21st, 2011 at 01:01pm
  • KshoOwh

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    i fucking cried sooooo much while reading.
    THIS ISSOOO FUCKIN AMAAAAAZING <3
    December 21st, 2011 at 10:30am
  • space is for stars.

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    Normally I don't read one-shots, but I'm glad I read this one.
    It was amazing and I loved this sooo much.
    This took me like more than an hour to read and it's now two in the morning, but reading this is worth being very tired at school tomorrow (Well technically today actually.) :) It was just so great.
    And of course I wouldn't mind an epilogue!!
    December 21st, 2011 at 10:11am