Trading Heartbeats - Comments

this is an older fic, but I found it just a bit ago and just finished ready it a second time. It is amazing! I am not a huge mpreg fan but this story is wonderful :) Just thought you should know!

This was truly great I have a weakness for mpreg a and yours kept me interested the whole time!!

Every single story I have read from you has turned out perfect. Please write on epilogue even though it has been forever since you actually wrote this but I would love to see on epilogue for this.

can one die because of cuteness? if so i just did! your writing is amazing and your stories are so cute and everythign! this was just totally adorable! i loved it! thank you so much for writing this!

I don't know how you do it but I love every story you ever wrote! this was so cute and I 'aww'-ed all the time. :)

I just reread this again. I love all your fics and would still love to see an epilogue even though it's like a year since you wrote this lol

hey I just met you
and this is crazy
I love your stories
especially when there's a baby
Loved this so much. Seriously. Like. Can that be my life?

Oh my gosh! So cute and perfect and....
Please tell me that epilogue exists or is working on being existing? Because I need it in my life!!!!!

-kayt

Hi, I know you finished this 8months ago but did you ever write the epilogue or still want to? I would love to see what they're doing now.

So I just started reading this -not done- ill get back to you on that, but I just had to pause and say how amazing this is and how cute Martin was when he freaked out over the message from John. :) just got to that part, and I dunno, but I totally played that out in my head (like a freak) and I could totally see Martin's voice cracking when he was all like, "Jack? Help me." haha anywho, this is amazing. I want a sequel and I'm not even done reading yet lol

WoW I loved that it was so adorable. I'd read an epilouge

An epilogue is definitely required. I loved this. I loved how they went from hating each other to loving each other. It was all written and spaced out so perfectly. You rock.

This was actually amazing.. but of course it was because you wrote it! and i would love to have more of this! :D

This was actually amazing.. but of course it was because you wrote it! and i would love to have more of this! :D

I positively LOVED how long this was, all oneshots should be like this! Amazing writing and please, an epilogue!

omg.....best 1 chapter fic ever. i swear.!!! your should totally do an epilogue!! eeep. so excited.

This took me forever to read but it was so worth it! I absolutely loved it! I would for sure read an epilogue!

Fuck that was long! But amazing (:

i fucking cried sooooo much while reading.
THIS ISSOOO FUCKIN AMAAAAAZING <3

Normally I don't read one-shots, but I'm glad I read this one.
It was amazing and I loved this sooo much.
This took me like more than an hour to read and it's now two in the morning, but reading this is worth being very tired at school tomorrow (Well technically today actually.) :) It was just so great.
And of course I wouldn't mind an epilogue!!