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My good gracious, your writing is exquisite! I absolutely adore the first two chapters, they're so detailed and fascinating. You have quite some talent, Maria.
I'm looking forward to reading the next chapters to come! :)

If I needed another reason to like this story, which I hardly do, it would be that you used one of my all time favourite names! Kali. I've never heard anyone use that name before! How awesome <3

I also really enjoy the feel I get from this story. There is romance and light heartedness but such an undertone of something more sinister. Your characters are becoming very well developed. I want to know more about them and what happens with Kali. Another thing you do really well are the descriptions. I can totally feel exactly what this town is like and what the kids are like.

Wonderful! Please update soon. I will be sticking around for sure.
P.S. I didn't think it was too long, I thought this chapter was a perfect length.

Im amazed. You've got yourself quite a leading chapter there and I'm just about ready to follow this story to all the incredible places it's gonna go! Update soon:)

I cannot believe how captivating this first chapter is. I am completely intrigued, this story seems like it’s going to go amazing places. Consider me subscribed.