Lines Are Crossed - Comments

Jack you naughty little boy. I'm glad you updated. I have missed this story. Looking forward to the next update.

I like how so far, this is the type of sequel that doesn't require you to read the prequel. I almost think it's better when an author is able to create an entirely new story line and just write small glimpses of the past from the prequel.
There's only one chapter but I can already tell that this story is going to be good! Elena and Alex have an unstable relationship, however 'in love' they may seem, and from the small description of the summary, I can tell there's going to be lots of drama with them!
And I'm curious to know about Jack's issues - like why he finds it necessary to ignore his home life while out on tour. Poor Marla!
I'm sure this story is going to be amazing and hold a bit more depth than some stories on here!
Congrats on the contest win! :)

Ah, I love it. Seriously, you genius. Love how Elena and Alex are so cute together, like they should be. Now Jack just needs to get his shit together...

I loved it, loved it, loved it. Ahhhhhh I can't wait for more of this. Poor Marla. I Wish jack would just answer his phone :(

Love it! Keep it up :)

Ahh... I just got caught up on It Takes More, and I am sooo excited for this. Hurry yo ass up! :P

me too! I'm quite curious about it :)

Can't wait for this story to start. I loved both of the prequels and I can't wait to see the insides into Jack and Marla's relationship. Update soon :)