Didn't You Hear What I Said? - Comments

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well, while this is a bit cliché and teenager, it's really fluffy and cute, which I appreciate.
I do advice you to revise this, run through spell check or a beta reader, because there are a lot of grammar and spelling mistakes. But no worries, they're fixable!
This seems to be a really old story though, I guess your writing has improved greatly since the.

>.<

This is really cute. It's a nicely-paced, fluffy romance. It's also well-written, for the most part. There are a couple places towards the beginning where the sentences felt a tad awkward, and a few places where you changed tense, but those aren't in any way hard to fix up.

I do hope there's a follow up!

And yeah, I just read that again. :p

Awww, awww... AWWW.
I knew that he was just messing with him.
I KNEW IT!
WAAAAAAHAHAHA.
Anyway, this is so adorable! x3

That was sooo cute and.. hawt (;

My page!

And oh, I hope there's more. :D

Awww, awww, awww..
That was so cute.
I LOVE IT!