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  • iamvegas

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    that story was freaking good! can't wait to read the sequel.
    May 31st, 2013 at 06:29pm
  • CourageKeeper

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    fucking beautiful <3
    March 11th, 2013 at 02:02pm
  • Writer in the Rye

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    I'm totally in love with this story. It's so adorable. Just make sure you're not changing your tenses between past and present in the same paragraph. Like in chapter two the it says

    "I suggest." which is present

    then it says right after that "he just nodded..." which is past.

    The story is still perfect in every way possible, I'm like in tears almost ;)
    February 17th, 2013 at 04:11am
  • Writer in the Rye

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    YOU ARE SO FREAKING TALENTED :D You are such a gifted writer. How come this isn't a published book already? I ADORE IT! I would die of happiness if I could write like you.
    February 16th, 2013 at 10:13pm
  • whatsernamexxidiot

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    I love it :'3 Please up-date soon :D Can't wait for the sequel!!!
    January 17th, 2013 at 12:16am
  • ShellBell234

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    I love this story so much! I hope you update soon cause I can't wait to see what happens next :)
    January 12th, 2013 at 09:20pm
  • itsparamshayall

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    Man I love that song so much and you putting it in the chapter omg. Update again soon :)
    January 12th, 2013 at 08:01pm
  • nina9707

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    This story gives me so many feels ahhh
    December 29th, 2012 at 08:15am
  • JPARADOWSKI16

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    Woo! Pumped for the sequal!
    December 29th, 2012 at 07:06am
  • broskees.

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    Update
    Y'know you should update
    Update
    December 28th, 2012 at 02:49pm
  • Zaffhi

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    I'm so glad Cameron's okay! I like Oli, but I feel like Cameron and Kyle would be better. I dunno c:
    December 27th, 2012 at 04:03am
  • SkyeeATL

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    Oh my god you have me a fucking heart attack. I love her and Oli together though... Update soon pleeeeeease :3
    December 27th, 2012 at 01:33am
  • faussaire

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    As you wish, ..."D'AWWW"
    December 27th, 2012 at 01:25am
  • itsparamshayall

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    I like her and Oli way better together. update again soon! :)
    December 27th, 2012 at 12:32am
  • Zaffhi

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    OH MY GOD! My breathing literally stopped when she saw Cameron!
    December 15th, 2012 at 07:26am
  • littleedeath

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    awwwh<3 Oli is presh!
    December 4th, 2012 at 01:47am
  • Loud Papers

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    So happy you're updating!
    December 3rd, 2012 at 09:58pm
  • SharperThanWeapons

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    Oh my gosh when I saw that this was updated you should have seen the way my face lit up!!! Update soon pretty pretty please!
    December 3rd, 2012 at 12:38pm
  • Avengedbaby00

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    Amazing story! Keep updating! Very Happy
    December 3rd, 2012 at 10:54am
  • Avengedbaby00

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    Amazing story! Keep updating! Very Happy
    December 3rd, 2012 at 10:54am
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