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  • Mr. Darcy

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    I just want to bring up a point. Stella and Shane are 16, Arianna is 15. You got Stella to drive an RV, which I looked at the picture of what you're basing it on and I'm finding it hard to believe that a sixteen year old could drive that, even though this is fiction. Fiction still has to have elements of realism in, and that certainly doesn't hold the realism. Most teenagers, even if they've been driving for two years, can just about drive a car, and there's no way Stella would have been driving for two years because I know getting a drivers' licence is not available at the age of fourteen.
    November 7th, 2012 at 09:35pm
  • ek.is.leif.vir.jou

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    Sounds great!! I would love to have that RV though! It's ridiculous!!
    August 2nd, 2012 at 05:50am
  • KellShadows

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    <3333 I was going to be really really sad if you weren't going to write a sequel! I can't wait to read it! =)
    July 17th, 2012 at 06:30am
  • Star Angel

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    Love this please update
    July 15th, 2012 at 10:00am
  • KellShadows

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    <333 Up-date again soon!! I can't wait to see what's going to happen next! =)
    July 14th, 2012 at 07:38am
  • CrazyPebbles21

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    I love it
    Update soon
    July 14th, 2012 at 06:51am
  • KillJoySynner

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    More. that is all. :D
    July 14th, 2012 at 05:55am
  • Star Angel

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    Well first u should tell us what they do about not telling the mom lol update soon
    July 9th, 2012 at 11:17am
  • Justice Rader

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    please update soon i want to know what happens with matt and arie and arie and shane
    July 9th, 2012 at 06:26am
  • batbeautyxx

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    I'm all for you skipping a couple of weeks(:
    July 9th, 2012 at 01:39am
  • TheJokersWife

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    This is a pretty awesome story. I hope you update soon. I love reading any A7X fanfic.
    July 6th, 2012 at 12:14am
  • Dead Puppeteer

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    This story is pretty rad. I a huge Avenged Sevenfold fan, so that is a plus. I love the concept you have going. Although, I think you should add more detail to it.

    I noticed a few grammatical errors and a misplaced word or two while going through this, but nothing too indecent.

    Yo u should make a layout for this, it would catch the reader's attention better.

    Update soon.
    June 16th, 2012 at 05:53pm
  • Star Angel

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    love this please please update soon so freaking good
    June 1st, 2012 at 09:15am
  • CrazyPebbles21

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    I love this chapter
    It was a Shocker LOL XD
    I hope They get along soon I just love happy ending Ha-Ha =D
    Update soon
    I can't wait to see what happens next =^D
    June 1st, 2012 at 06:38am
  • Star Angel

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    love this please please please update soon
    May 28th, 2012 at 02:00am
  • CrazyPebbles21

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    great chapter, that was funny what she did to matt XD matt going in dad mode.. LOL... update soon i can't wait to know what happens =D
    May 27th, 2012 at 09:03am
  • iMusic-Freak

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    Yay!!! Matt to the rescue!!! ^o^
    But, its sad because she almost got raped. ):
    January 3rd, 2012 at 05:47pm
  • Star Angel

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    Aw more love ur little note at the end and it is sad that Jimmy died he will foREVer be missed
    December 29th, 2011 at 10:32am
  • KellShadows

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    <3333 Up-date again soon!! I can't wait to see what's going to happen next!! =D
    December 29th, 2011 at 06:31am
  • Alexandrias Nitemare

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    Love the update <3 it was nice and love the authors note at the end it was very heart warming
    December 29th, 2011 at 01:20am
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