Hello my UK friend!!! It is I again!! Great story!! I cannot believe try have to kill Sammi's father!! I swear Xenos is Sammi's boyfriend??!? Sorry but it's a little confusing... '~' look now I have commented can u pls update???!?!
Hahaha... Well... Science Teacher: We'll all grow up eventually. We'll all mature. Mikey: I've never really grown up. Dinosaurs are awesome. I'm not going to mature. Science Teacher: (sighs) Mikey: Do you want to know my favorite dinosaur? (class laughs) Science Teacher: Sure, Mikey. Sure. Mikey: Torosaurus! (class silence except for me who...is laughing her ass off xD) Science Teacher: Torosaurus? Mikey: Yeah. Look it up. (And the next day he looked it up in front of the class...haha xD)
I'm not sure if this means anything to you, but your writing style makes me think of Francesca Lia Block. It's very simple. Little sentences are very meaningful. You can feel there's a lot going on in a little space.