Only You. - Comments

and at first there in middle school. then it transitions to high school.

Thanks for the critic! it means alot

I read the first two chapters and got slightly confused >.< Are they in junior high or high school?
Also. Your sentences are really short, don't be afraid to add comma's, they won't kill you! :D The story line has potential, I'm not very big on boyxboy personally...more girlxgirl. Ii'm biased to say so) I suggest adding some more character development and details! That will make the story 10x better. I'm the sort of person who wants to be there, absorbed in the characters, make me love someone, make me hate someone. I do find Jack adorable though, in a brotherly way. Keep up the good work, remember, writing can always be edited and improved! :)