this is fantastic! have you ever thought about writing a full length Dan story? because i'm sure it would be amazing and i would love to see you do it :-)
Okay, so first off I have to say that I love Dan Flint to pieces and I want him to father my children. Secondly, there aren't many Dan stories or even one-shots on here so I got really excited when I saw that he was one of the characters. Third, oh my goodness, this was beautiful. As soon as I began reading I knew that I was going to enjoy it and I loved it so much. It was so sad and heart breaking, but the happy parts were adorable. I was really surprised towards the end when Jake showed because I didn't think Ellie was seeing anyone, but I felt so bad for Dan. I wanted Ellie to take him back. :(
Anyway, this was so wonderfully written and I enjoyed it a lot. You're an amazing writer. :)
Seriously you don't even know how close I was to crying when they broke up. Just the thought of Dan crying made me want to cry. This was so amazing. You know how much I love your writing.